Is this an interesting intro to my story?

Sounds pretty spooky, and pretty interesting to me. The last sentence though... 'My mind began to shrivel into nothing', sounds too final and might make it difficult for you to continue your story. What happens then? They pass out? Might want to change that to something more manageable like "My mind began to swim and panic began to over take me." Anyhow, perhaps you already have something lined up, but I like it so far. :)